 lbc_sublime |
heh guys i play rhythym more than lead and was working on a song. it might completely change but i was wondering someone elses opinion. it is just kinda some ideas for the progression
the key is Amin
it was origanally supose to be played on acoustic but i don't have anything to record well with, o well
tell if you need anything else or whateve or if you think it is weak or whatknot thanks
it is in my profile called rhythm
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heh guys i play rhythym more than lead and was working on a song. it might completely change but i was wondering someone elses opinion. it is just kinda some ideas for the progression
the key is Amin
it was origanally supose to be played on acoustic but i don't have anything to record well with, o well
tell if you need anything else or whateve or if you think it is weak or whatknot thanks
it is in my profile called rhythm
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metal4all |
I think it may "drag on" a little bit. If it changed more rhythmically and or harmonically (ie: modulation) or something it would be a little "better".
I'm not too good at judging these types of things though. I just think it sounds wonderful, but could change things up because a lot of people don't like listening to a song for too long. |
I think it may "drag on" a little bit. If it changed more rhythmically and or harmonically (ie: modulation) or something it would be a little "better".
I'm not too good at judging these types of things though. I just think it sounds wonderful, but could change things up because a lot of people don't like listening to a song for too long. |
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