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XxGibsonSGxX

Okay, here you go. Songs have lyrics, so post whatever you want here. Even parts; perhaps some of us can add a touch to an intro or a chorus that you're stuck on. I'll post something I wrote a while back.

Hello Officer - M. Van Dompseler

Hello, Officer
How are you?
Carry on with your patrol
You find seeing me here unusual
As the hour is late, and Im alone
I left home in a state of distress
My wife was yelling, the kids were cryin
And youve found me all alone

Im standing over the rail on the old bridge
Maybe I can swim downriver; tread frigid water
The dampness of my clothes and the numbing of limb s
Tricked me into thinking I got used to this before I drowned

Hello, Officer
Are you okay?
Rookie cop, new to the force
You found me downstream on the shore
Cried a little, but you get used to it
Got up, called me in; notify my next of kin
And now my wifes crying; the kids are silent
The words she said now fill her with regret

Im standing over the rail on the old bridge
Maybe I can swim downriver; tread frigid water
The dampness of my clothes and the numbing of limb s
Tricked me into thinking the water was warm

Hello, Officer
Will you be there?
Its my funeral today
My wife wears black; a widow now
The tears come as twenty one guns
Pay their respects in a salute I dont deserve

I was leaning over the rail on the old bridge
Staring at the troubled water which had no problem s
A face I thought I knew wavered in front of me
It told me I was having one of those nights
Where nothing went well, but it would be alright
Hello, there you said to me; a startled scare
Caused me to slip and go over the side
Hello, Officer was all I could say
As the current took hold and washed me away

Hello, Officer, this wasnt your fault
If that face hadnt been there, telling a lie
Youd stay on patrol and I wouldnt have died



Okay, here you go. Songs have lyrics, so post whatever you want here. Even parts; perhaps some of us can add a touch to an intro or a chorus that you're stuck on. I'll post something I wrote a while back.

Hello Officer - M. Van Dompseler

Hello, Officer
How are you?
Carry on with your patrol
You find seeing me here unusual
As the hour is late, and Im alone
I left home in a state of distress
My wife was yelling, the kids were cryin
And youve found me all alone

Im standing over the rail on the old bridge
Maybe I can swim downriver; tread frigid water
The dampness of my clothes and the numbing of limbs
Tricked me into thinking I got used to this before I drowned

Hello, Officer
Are you okay?
Rookie cop, new to the force
You found me downstream on the shore
Cried a little, but you get used to it
Got up, called me in; notify my next of kin
And now my wifes crying; the kids are silent
The words she said now fill her with regret

Im standing over the rail on the old bridge
Maybe I can swim downriver; tread frigid water
The dampness of my clothes and the numbing of limbs
Tricked me into thinking the water was warm

Hello, Officer
Will you be there?
Its my funeral today
My wife wears black; a widow now
The tears come as twenty one guns
Pay their respects in a salute I dont deserve

I was leaning over the rail on the old bridge
Staring at the troubled water which had no problems
A face I thought I knew wavered in front of me
It told me I was having one of those nights
Where nothing went well, but it would be alright
Hello, there you said to me; a startled scare
Caused me to slip and go over the side
Hello, Officer was all I could say
As the current took hold and washed me away

Hello, Officer, this wasnt your fault
If that face hadnt been there, telling a lie
Youd stay on patrol and I wouldnt have died



Posted: Sep 14, 2008 8:09 PM - Quote - Report!

KoRn-FrEaK-15

O.O dude, these lyrics like...made my eyes bulge out of my head in awe! you wrote these? they're great! GREAT I TELL YOU! GREAT! lol O.O dude, these lyrics like...made my eyes bulge out of my head in awe! you wrote these? they're great! GREAT I TELL YOU! GREAT! lol
Posted: Sep 16, 2008 2:51 AM - Quote - Report!

XxGibsonSGxX

Well, It's supposed to be slow, arpeggiated and whatnot, and have a fast bit near the "old bridge" part. I was thinking it could be sung more spaced out and slow, like The Eagles singing Pink Floyd's "Comfortably Numb" sort of deal. Dunno for sure, yet. Well, It's supposed to be slow, arpeggiated and whatnot, and have a fast bit near the "old bridge" part. I was thinking it could be sung more spaced out and slow, like The Eagles singing Pink Floyd's "Comfortably Numb" sort of deal. Dunno for sure, yet.
Posted: Sep 16, 2008 4:07 AM - Quote - Report!

devilex121

thats cool man! thats cool man!
Posted: Sep 18, 2008 2:29 PM - Quote - Report!

KoRn-FrEaK-15

Insanely cool, those are great. Insanely cool, those are great.
Posted: Sep 19, 2008 2:55 AM - Quote - Report!

KoRn-FrEaK-15

Kyle Vanover - Lead a Life Less Empty

(start out with drums and slow guitar)

after intro

Take a look at me
See what I cant see
All because im leaving here today

Take my hand
Hold it close
Dont let me slip away

Before I leave..
Ill be sure to tell you
To Lead a Life Less Empty
(Dont forget me) Whispers

Not really a FULL song, but i mean this is my first...and they're kinda crappy, but oh well LoL
Kyle Vanover - Lead a Life Less Empty

(start out with drums and slow guitar)

after intro

Take a look at me
See what I cant see
All because im leaving here today

Take my hand
Hold it close
Dont let me slip away

Before I leave..
Ill be sure to tell you
To Lead a Life Less Empty
(Dont forget me) Whispers

Not really a FULL song, but i mean this is my first...and they're kinda crappy, but oh well LoL
Posted: Sep 19, 2008 2:55 AM - Quote - Report!

XxGibsonSGxX

Man they aren't too bad for a first time - a little cliche, but nonetheless, a good effort on your first try. :) Man they aren't too bad for a first time - a little cliche, but nonetheless, a good effort on your first try. :)
Posted: Sep 20, 2008 8:53 PM - Quote - Report!

KoRn-FrEaK-15

LoLz thanks man. its supposed to have a KoRn feeling put into it. LoLz thanks man. its supposed to have a KoRn feeling put into it.
Posted: Sep 22, 2008 10:07 PM - Quote - Report!

devilex121

KoRn-FrEaK-15 wrote on Sep 22nd, 2008 at 5:07pm :
LoLz thanks man. its supposed to have a KoRn feeling put into it.

i see what you mean
[QUOTE u='KoRn-FrEaK-15' d='2008-09-22 17:07:05']LoLz thanks man. its supposed to have a KoRn feeling put into it.[/QUOTE]
i see what you mean
Posted: Dec 14, 2008 5:07 AM - Quote - Report!

devilex121